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== Article voice? == | == Article voice? == | ||
As this is a wiki, it is probably necessary for all articles to reflect: | As this is a wiki, it is probably necessary for all articles to reflect: | ||
# NPOV (neutral point of view), and | # NPOV (neutral point of view), and | ||
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== Re: New level images == | == Re: New level images == | ||
No problem, I was just updating the old images to be of consistent size (467 x 300) and also have a <nowiki>[[Category:Level images]]</nowiki> tag. So for future images, please remember to add the level images category to each screenshot of a level you upload! Also, this is not required, but if you could "crop" your screenshots such that only the entire frame (excluding the green background) is shown. (By frame, I mean the thin gray thingy around the level and also around the info box.) You'll know you did it correctly if the image size is 467 x 300. {{Signatures/Icy001}} 22:29, 5 December 2008 (UTC) | No problem, I was just updating the old images to be of consistent size (467 x 300) and also have a <nowiki>[[Category:Level images]]</nowiki> tag. So for future images, please remember to add the level images category to each screenshot of a level you upload! Also, this is not required, but if you could "crop" your screenshots such that only the entire frame (excluding the green background) is shown. (By frame, I mean the thin gray thingy around the level and also around the info box.) You'll know you did it correctly if the image size is 467 x 300. {{Signatures/Icy001}} 22:29, 5 December 2008 (UTC) | ||
:OK, I guess I won't complain about it ^_^ Do you use mspaint to crop them or some other program? | :OK, I guess I won't complain about it ^_^ Do you use mspaint to crop them or some other program? | ||
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== New level images == | == New level images == | ||
Hey, I just wanted to tell you something. I made a short program that essentially takes a screenshot of each level and (after cropping the necessary stuff) saves it to a file called "Level XXX.png", repeated 149 times. Basically what the code does is that it loops 149 times, and does the following for each time: | Hey, I just wanted to tell you something. I made a short program that essentially takes a screenshot of each level and (after cropping the necessary stuff) saves it to a file called "Level XXX.png", repeated 149 times. Basically what the code does is that it loops 149 times, and does the following for each time: | ||
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== 你好！新潮！ == | == 你好！新潮！ == | ||
Ni hao! Xin chao! {{Signatures/Icy001}} 01:30, 8 December 2008 (UTC) | Ni hao! Xin chao! {{Signatures/Icy001}} 01:30, 8 December 2008 (UTC) | ||
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== Links == | == Links == | ||
Remember that per ALL wikia sites, the proper way to link with plurals is <nowiki>[[thingy]]s</nowiki>, not with pipes! Thanks, {{Signatures/Icy001}} 01:55, 10 December 2008 (UTC) | Remember that per ALL wikia sites, the proper way to link with plurals is <nowiki>[[thingy]]s</nowiki>, not with pipes! Thanks, {{Signatures/Icy001}} 01:55, 10 December 2008 (UTC) | ||
== Other Tiles == | == Other Tiles == | ||
Since you are the only other active person on this Wiki :P, I was wondering if an article should be made for random force floors and the unused tiles. Geochip1 22:45, 26 December 2008 (UTC) | |||
Since you are the only other active person on this Wiki :P, I was wondering if an article should be made for random force floors and the unused tiles. | |||
== Re:Special Templates == | == Re:Special Templates == | ||
Not that I know of, but their might be someone at | Not that I know of, but their might be someone at Central Wikia who knows about s special function. | ||
{{Signatures/craiga2124}} 04:05, 28 December 2008 (UTC) | {{Signatures/craiga2124}} 04:05, 28 December 2008 (UTC) | ||
== Re: CCLP2 videos being uploaded now! == | == Re: CCLP2 videos being uploaded now! == | ||
I already have the CCLP2 images :D. Just tell me your e-mail address and I'll e-mail them to you.... or I'll just upload them. | I already have the CCLP2 images :D. Just tell me your e-mail address and I'll e-mail them to you.... or I'll just upload them. | ||
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== Congrats! == | == Congrats! == | ||
Congrats on finishing all the CC1 and CCLP2 levels! | Congrats on finishing all the CC1 and CCLP2 levels! | ||
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== CCLP2 designers == | == CCLP2 designers == | ||
Since it seems a level designer category isn't going to be added to the level infobox soon, should we just add the level designer names in the page just not in the infobox? Geochip1 01:08, 30 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
Since it seems a level designer category isn't going to be added to the level infobox soon, should we just add the level designer names in the page just not in the infobox? | |||
:Yeah, at this point, it doesn't seem feasible to edit... 298... pages... just to add a small piece of information, in which half of them don't even apply! (CC1) {{Signatures/Icy001}} 03:01, 30 January 2009 (UTC) | :Yeah, at this point, it doesn't seem feasible to edit... 298... pages... just to add a small piece of information, in which half of them don't even apply! (CC1) {{Signatures/Icy001}} 03:01, 30 January 2009 (UTC) | ||
== Re: Your article... == | == Re: Your article... == | ||
I guess you could call the article Mike Lask and then just mention that I go by / am better known as Mike L... Or you could even call the article Mike L if you want since that's what I go by most often... | I guess you could call the article Mike Lask and then just mention that I go by / am better known as Mike L... Or you could even call the article Mike L if you want since that's what I go by most often... | ||
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== RE: Clearing Image Cache == | == RE: Clearing Image Cache == | ||
May I ask which images you were talking about? | May I ask which images you were talking about? | ||
{{Signatures/craiga2124}} 02:40, 26 May 2009 (UTC) | {{Signatures/craiga2124}} 02:40, 26 May 2009 (UTC) | ||
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== Telenet directions... :-) == | == Telenet directions... :-) == | ||
Thanks for catching my mistake in editing Telenet. I was originally just going to add the safe route, but then something felt funny about the fast solution. Obviously my mistake was thinking "U2L..." meant "UUL..." instead of "ULL..." I was confused by how moves on a Rubik's cube are notated. I realized my mistake later while reading another page in the wiki, by which time you had already corrected it. Well, at least now the directions match those in the video, as there was one U instead of a L originally. What about the last teleports before getting the key? I'll edit it to say R and L for now because that's what's in the video, though they seem equivalent otherwise. | Thanks for catching my mistake in editing Telenet. I was originally just going to add the safe route, but then something felt funny about the fast solution. Obviously my mistake was thinking "U2L..." meant "UUL..." instead of "ULL..." I was confused by how moves on a Rubik's cube are notated. I realized my mistake later while reading another page in the wiki, by which time you had already corrected it. Well, at least now the directions match those in the video, as there was one U instead of a L originally. What about the last teleports before getting the key? I'll edit it to say R and L for now because that's what's in the video, though they seem equivalent otherwise. | ||
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== Feedback/discussion page? == | == Feedback/discussion page? == | ||
Is there a page to discuss this wiki in general and provide feedback on it? For example, I feel that level guides are too biased towards experts aiming for bold times and against less experienced players who just want to complete the level. Perhaps there could be a community discussion on how to address this. By the way, your userpage needs updating - you are no longer tied for second with David Stolp! --[[User:HKn|HKn]] 04:27, 16 June 2009 (UTC) | Is there a page to discuss this wiki in general and provide feedback on it? For example, I feel that level guides are too biased towards experts aiming for bold times and against less experienced players who just want to complete the level. Perhaps there could be a community discussion on how to address this. By the way, your userpage needs updating - you are no longer tied for second with David Stolp! --[[User:HKn|HKn]] 04:27, 16 June 2009 (UTC) | ||
== Re: Video transition... == | == Re: Video transition... == | ||
Yep, I've been using a bunch of the newer ones of yours that I bypassed last time... And Craig said he didn't care if the other videos were deleted - I just wanted to start reuploading first, so I wouldn't end up deleting them and then changing my mind about it again or something... :-) [[User:Pillowpc2001|Pillowpc2001]] 20:35, 18 June 2009 (UTC) | Yep, I've been using a bunch of the newer ones of yours that I bypassed last time... And Craig said he didn't care if the other videos were deleted - I just wanted to start reuploading first, so I wouldn't end up deleting them and then changing my mind about it again or something... :-) [[User:Pillowpc2001|Pillowpc2001]] 20:35, 18 June 2009 (UTC) | ||
:I guess the main benefits are 1) when you (or anyone else that has the password) creates a new AVI, you can just upload it right away without having to rely on me (although I guess you'll still need to send it to me for the AVI site), and 2) you can add annotations to the videos if you think they're needed. Although I saw there was a new feature on YT that let you allow someone else to add annotations to your videos, so I guess the move wasn't necessary for that reason... [[User:Pillowpc2001|Pillowpc2001]] 21:09, 18 June 2009 (UTC) | :I guess the main benefits are 1) when you (or anyone else that has the password) creates a new AVI, you can just upload it right away without having to rely on me (although I guess you'll still need to send it to me for the AVI site), and 2) you can add annotations to the videos if you think they're needed. Although I saw there was a new feature on YT that let you allow someone else to add annotations to your videos, so I guess the move wasn't necessary for that reason... [[User:Pillowpc2001|Pillowpc2001]] 21:09, 18 June 2009 (UTC) | ||
== Fairunfair.png reupload? == | == Fairunfair.png reupload? == | ||
Hey, Octavarium, can I re-upload this picture you made?<br> | Hey, Octavarium, can I re-upload this picture you made?<br> | ||
Fairunfair.png<br> | Fairunfair.png<br> | ||
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== Hey, I remember you! == | == Hey, I remember you! == | ||
Hey Andrew! [[User:William S.|William S.]] 06:26, 26 June 2009 (UTC) | Hey Andrew! [[User:William S.|William S.]] 06:26, 26 June 2009 (UTC) | ||
== Re: A missing piece. == | == Re: A missing piece. == | ||
I think you have it understood... I wonder if it still works with a longer patch of ice... | I think you have it understood... I wonder if it still works with a longer patch of ice... | ||
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== Happy birthday :p == | == Happy birthday :p == | ||
[[User:Jamesa7171|Jamesa7171]] 22:48, 6 July 2009 (UTC) | [[User:Jamesa7171|Jamesa7171]] 22:48, 6 July 2009 (UTC) | ||
== Skelzie AVI == | == Skelzie AVI == | ||
I got James Anderson's 454 AVI for Skelzie uploaded to ChipWiki. Should we switch the Skelzie page to use that one? [[User:Pillowpc2001|Pillowpc2001]] 00:00, 21 July 2009 (UTC) | I got James Anderson's 454 AVI for Skelzie uploaded to ChipWiki. Should we switch the Skelzie page to use that one? [[User:Pillowpc2001|Pillowpc2001]] 00:00, 21 July 2009 (UTC) | ||
== Re: Cloned Chip and annotations == | == Re: Cloned Chip and annotations == | ||
You'll probably have to ask John or David about the cloned Chip glitch, I would think they'd know since John designed a level around it, and David...well, knows everything about CC... :-) | You'll probably have to ask John or David about the cloned Chip glitch, I would think they'd know since John designed a level around it, and David...well, knows everything about CC... :-) | ||
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== Minor Edits == | == Minor Edits == | ||
It seems that lots of times you mark your pages as minor edits when they really aren't. For convenience sake, could you follow these rules that Wikipedia defines for a minor edit? | It seems that lots of times you mark your pages as minor edits when they really aren't. For convenience sake, could you follow these rules that Wikipedia defines for a minor edit? | ||
===When to mark an edit as minor=== | === When to mark an edit as minor === | ||
* Spelling corrections | * Spelling corrections | ||
* Simple formatting (e.g. capitalization, punctuation, or properly adding italics to non-English words, like folie de grandeur) | * Simple formatting (e.g. capitalization, punctuation, or properly adding italics to non-English words, like folie de grandeur) | ||
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* Adding or correcting wikilinks | * Adding or correcting wikilinks | ||
* Removing vandalism and graffiti | * Removing vandalism and graffiti | ||
===When not to mark an edit as minor=== | === When not to mark an edit as minor === | ||
* Adding content to an article | * Adding content to an article | ||
* Removing content from an article | * Removing content from an article | ||
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* Removing tags or other templates from an article | * Removing tags or other templates from an article | ||
* Adding comments to a talk page | * Adding comments to a talk page | ||
Thanks | Thanks Geochip1 22:27, 26 August 2009 (UTC) | ||
:Hmmm, I didn't know about these rules either - thanks for posting... [[User:Pillowpc2001|Pillowpc2001]] 03:56, 29 August 2009 (UTC) | :Hmmm, I didn't know about these rules either - thanks for posting... [[User:Pillowpc2001|Pillowpc2001]] 03:56, 29 August 2009 (UTC) | ||
== Re: What videos to use in playlists. == | == Re: What videos to use in playlists. == | ||
Sorry, I haven't been checking the Wiki a whole lot lately, so I missed this message. I see you did end up getting all the AVIs organized into playlists now. | Sorry, I haven't been checking the Wiki a whole lot lately, so I missed this message. I see you did end up getting all the AVIs organized into playlists now. | ||
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== Re: Community corner == | == Re: Community corner == | ||
I saw it, but only through the Recent Changes section... I wouldn't know where to find it other than that... [[User:Pillowpc2001|Pillowpc2001]] 22:16, October 25, 2009 (UTC) | I saw it, but only through the Recent Changes section... I wouldn't know where to find it other than that... [[User:Pillowpc2001|Pillowpc2001]] 22:16, October 25, 2009 (UTC) | ||
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== Chip's Challenge DS == | == Chip's Challenge DS == | ||
Hey andrew, | Hey andrew, | ||
<br /> | <br/> | ||
As you might notice i'm the one who has been working on Chip's Challenge for the nintendo DS, i would like your feedback on it and some suggestions (appart from the features that i didn't implement yet). I would love it if you could make some levels with my limited level set, the levelbuilder is written in PHP and the levels are saved automaticly on my server. The only problem is my current host is my own laptop so it isn't always online.. Most of the time its @ www.timfennis.nl/levelbuilder/new.php... | As you might notice i'm the one who has been working on Chip's Challenge for the nintendo DS, i would like your feedback on it and some suggestions (appart from the features that i didn't implement yet). I would love it if you could make some levels with my limited level set, the levelbuilder is written in PHP and the levels are saved automaticly on my server. The only problem is my current host is my own laptop so it isn't always online.. Most of the time its @ www.timfennis.nl/levelbuilder/new.php... | ||
Greetings | Greetings | ||
Tim Fennis<br /> | Tim Fennis<br/> | ||
<br /> | <br/> | ||
PS sorry for my crappy english :P | PS sorry for my crappy english :P | ||
===ROM=== | === ROM === | ||
Uhm, you can download oure current ROM from http://rapidshare.com/files/339985100/z.nds.html (temporary host) but we dont have a level yet, this is just a debug run for the block and the pink ball (which is going twice as fast as chip).. a friend of mine has a host, i'm waiting for him to come online. | Uhm, you can download oure current ROM from http://rapidshare.com/files/339985100/z.nds.html (temporary host) but we dont have a level yet, this is just a debug run for the block and the pink ball (which is going twice as fast as chip).. a friend of mine has a host, i'm waiting for him to come online. | ||
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== A new glitch, perhaps? == | == A new glitch, perhaps? == | ||
I was experimenting in CCDesign and have created this level: | I was experimenting in CCDesign and have created this level: | ||
http://www.ecst.csuchico.edu/~pieguy/chips/level.php?set=TCCLPRejects&level=36 | http://www.ecst.csuchico.edu/~pieguy/chips/level.php?set=TCCLPRejects&level=36 | ||
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And the six clone buttons on the left are just there to make the tanks moving, and has nothing to do with the glitch. | And the six clone buttons on the left are just there to make the tanks moving, and has nothing to do with the glitch. | ||
-- | --Geochip1 00:12, March 29, 2010 (UTC) | ||
== April Fools' Day Hoaxes == | == April Fools' Day Hoaxes == | ||
Yes, you should write an article about it. I don't think as many epic pertaining to CC things have happened than on this day. --Geochip1 01:40, April 2, 2010 (UTC) | |||
Yes, you should write an article about it. I don't think as many epic pertaining to CC things have happened than on this day. -- | |||
== Mouse moves == | == Mouse moves == | ||
In your edit to [[Teleport Skip Glitch]] you replaced a lot of the wording with things about half step pauses. But the reason the glitch works on Skelzie (and the reason it requires the mouse) really has nothing to do with half step pauses. (In fact, in the current state of the article it is quite unclear why the mouse is required). The reason it works is order of execution. Normally the order is voluntary, creatures, involuntary, sliplist, but use of the mouse allows an extra voluntary move between involuntary and sliplist (but only if an involuntary move was performed). Anywho, the reason I'm posting here instead of just <strike>reverting</strike> rewording your edits is because I noticed that there's no page on mouse moves, and it really seems like it deserves one (especially considering that wierd notation you use for describing them). [[User:Davidstolp|Davidstolp]] 19:11, April 11, 2010 (UTC) | In your edit to [[Teleport Skip Glitch]] you replaced a lot of the wording with things about half step pauses. But the reason the glitch works on Skelzie (and the reason it requires the mouse) really has nothing to do with half step pauses. (In fact, in the current state of the article it is quite unclear why the mouse is required). The reason it works is order of execution. Normally the order is voluntary, creatures, involuntary, sliplist, but use of the mouse allows an extra voluntary move between involuntary and sliplist (but only if an involuntary move was performed). Anywho, the reason I'm posting here instead of just <strike>reverting</strike> rewording your edits is because I noticed that there's no page on mouse moves, and it really seems like it deserves one (especially considering that wierd notation you use for describing them). [[User:Davidstolp|Davidstolp]] 19:11, April 11, 2010 (UTC) | ||
== Normal and Bold Difficulties == | == Normal and Bold Difficulties == | ||
Alright, since many people have suggested and agreed with the idea, I'll start adding the bold difficulties to each page. Of course, I've only gotten the bold for less than half of them in CC1, and I don't even know how many I've gotten in CCLP2, but you can always change it as you wish. --Geochip1 16:52, June 24, 2010 (UTC) | |||
Alright, since many people have suggested and agreed with the idea, I'll start adding the bold difficulties to each page. Of course, I've only gotten the bold for less than half of them in CC1, and I don't even know how many I've gotten in CCLP2, but you can always change it as you wish. -- | |||
== Unconfirmed bold difficulties? == | == Unconfirmed bold difficulties? == | ||
What are we going to do about unconfirmed bolds, such as [[Teleblock]]? Do we mark it as 5 since only one person has achieved it, or do we just go by the confirmed bold? --Geochip1 18:15, June 24, 2010 (UTC) | |||
What are we going to do about unconfirmed bolds, such as [[Teleblock]]? Do we mark it as 5 since only one person has achieved it, or do we just go by the confirmed bold? -- | |||
== TomP3 Final Destination article? == | == TomP3 Final Destination article? == | ||
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== Block N Roll new route didn't actually save [6]? == | == Block N Roll new route didn't actually save [6]? == | ||
It appears so, anyway. I sent you a message on youtube about this, and I left a similar message on the level talk page. I got no responses to either, though, so I'm assuming you didn't see them (if you have, my apologies). <br> | It appears so, anyway. I sent you a message on youtube about this, and I left a similar message on the level talk page. I got no responses to either, though, so I'm assuming you didn't see them (if you have, my apologies). <br> | ||
[[User:Jamesa7171|Jamesa7171]] 22:17, July 15, 2010 (UTC) | [[User:Jamesa7171|Jamesa7171]] 22:17, July 15, 2010 (UTC) | ||
== Short Circuit? == | == Short Circuit? == | ||
I'm amazed to see that Short Circuit still has a Difficulty of 5, after both J.B. and my runs... We explained the strategy, which is only logical except for that one turn we always seem to screw on. I think that it definitely has to be reevaluated, for I consider far harder levels in CCLP2 to be only 4-rated and sometimes even 3. | I'm amazed to see that Short Circuit still has a Difficulty of 5, after both J.B. and my runs... We explained the strategy, which is only logical except for that one turn we always seem to screw on. I think that it definitely has to be reevaluated, for I consider far harder levels in CCLP2 to be only 4-rated and sometimes even 3. | ||
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== Pages for level sets == | == Pages for level sets == | ||
As you may have noticed, I started adding pages for custom sets, which will eventually replace the individual pages that have been at my site so far. So far I have done 102hardl.dat and 11levels.dat. Before I go any further, a few questions: | |||
As you may have noticed, I started adding pages for custom sets, which will eventually replace the individual pages that have been at my site so far. So far I have done | |||
* In the template I left a spot for an image preview of the set (if included, this would probably just be a screenshot of CC open to level 1 of the set); do you think this is necessary? Since I haven't been uploading any yet, I realized that this would result in almost 400 pages being added to the "Needs image" category... Or perhaps I could just remove that tag from the pages, but still leave a place for images to be uploaded if someone has one... | * In the template I left a spot for an image preview of the set (if included, this would probably just be a screenshot of CC open to level 1 of the set); do you think this is necessary? Since I haven't been uploading any yet, I realized that this would result in almost 400 pages being added to the "Needs image" category... Or perhaps I could just remove that tag from the pages, but still leave a place for images to be uploaded if someone has one... | ||
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:Oh yeah, I guess I do need to catch up on some of yours... :-) You can send me whatever ones I don't have yet, I should get them uploaded by tomorrow... [[User:Pillowpc2001|Pillowpc2001]] 03:57, December 21, 2010 (UTC) | :Oh yeah, I guess I do need to catch up on some of yours... :-) You can send me whatever ones I don't have yet, I should get them uploaded by tomorrow... [[User:Pillowpc2001|Pillowpc2001]] 03:57, December 21, 2010 (UTC) | ||
==Notice about Upcoming Page Template Changes== | == Notice about Upcoming Page Template Changes == | ||
Hello! I'm part of the Community Support Team at Wikia, and I want to let you know about an upcoming change that will affect this wiki. | Hello! I'm part of the Community Support Team at Wikia, and I want to let you know about an upcoming change that will affect this wiki. | ||
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Please be sure to let your community members know about this coming change. If you have any questions, you can get in touch with me here, on my talk page, or through [https://internal.wikia-inc.com/wiki/Special:Contact Special:Contact]. Thanks for maintaining such a wonderful wiki! | Please be sure to let your community members know about this coming change. If you have any questions, you can get in touch with me here, on my talk page, or through [https://internal.wikia-inc.com/wiki/Special:Contact Special:Contact]. Thanks for maintaining such a wonderful wiki! | ||
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== Nails == | == Nails == | ||
I noticed the article you made on [[Nail]]s. I find this amusing since this terminology derives from a misunderstanding of the hint in [[Wormwood]]. This isn't very surprising since the hint is far too oblique. It was actually intended to indicate which block was safe to push. The answer to the question the hint asks is "shield", and so it seems that "shield" would be a better name for this concept. [[User:Eric119|Eric119]] 06:19, July 30, 2011 (UTC) | I noticed the article you made on [[Nail]]s. I find this amusing since this terminology derives from a misunderstanding of the hint in [[Wormwood]]. This isn't very surprising since the hint is far too oblique. It was actually intended to indicate which block was safe to push. The answer to the question the hint asks is "shield", and so it seems that "shield" would be a better name for this concept. [[User:Eric119|Eric119]] 06:19, July 30, 2011 (UTC) | ||
==New article== | == New article == | ||
Hey, I created a new article, [[level clone]], which is about levels that copy others in layout and design. Can you read it and see if it needs improvement, please? [[Special:Contributions/201.211.12.141|201.211.12.141]] 06:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC) | Hey, I created a new article, [[level clone]], which is about levels that copy others in layout and design. Can you read it and see if it needs improvement, please? [[Special:Contributions/201.211.12.141|201.211.12.141]] 06:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC) | ||